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I'll save you the plot summary and get right to the point, I don't think the writing is as good as it could have been. I'm not very happy with the development of the characters and I think there could have been better details in regards to the settings. Neviahan was very had to imagine at times and I spent a lot of time going well how did this happen there was nothing to set it up. The play on fairytales was nice but could have been done better I had a hard time transitioning between scenes at points. Overall the writing is good but this isn't an extremely developed novel. Product provided for evaluation.
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